一、求职 信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。 下面二组例句的每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A:(1) Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager. (2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will B:(1) I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning\\s Journal that you are offering just the opportunity I am looking for. (2) Your advertisement in this morning\\s Journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.
二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似句子： It\\s hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed I would have to ask for a month as an initial salary. I don\\t feel that I should set my own salary, as I am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.
三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用： As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would $4,500 a month be too much? Do you think I would be asking too much if I said 5,000 dollars a month? You know what my services are worth better than I do. All I want is a living wage.
四、关于 求职 信结尾怎么写?下面也有二组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A:(1)软弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. (2)改写后(较佳)： If my qualifications meet your standards, I would be happy to speak with you in person. B:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的： If you are interested, please let me know immediately, as I\\m sure an interview will convince you I\\m the man for the job. (2)改写后：I would like to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.